Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Monday, December 16, 2019

Murder On My Mind (Inspired By Susan Williams) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have a murder on my mind;
I don't know what to do.
These crows are driving me insane;
how can I make them shoo?
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Susan Williams 25 September 2020

We could train eagles and falcons to do our dirty work for us [evil laughter off stage]. I was looking for the riddle I think I solved but cannot find it and now I will suffer from curiosity evermore!

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Susan Williams 04 January 2020

Hahahahahahahahahah! You and my husband- -he too thinks I inspire murderous thoughts! Spock's comment is also amusing- who would have thought that crows could inspire such humor? ? ? Kim, I am envious of your smooth stanzas and flow from line to line, 10+

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Kim Barney 04 January 2020

Susan, thank you so much for this comment. You have some pretty smooth lines yourself, and I'll bet you have inspired other people before me!

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Spock The Vegan 16 December 2019

If the intensity of the cawing is the first degree, then it's first degree murder! Ha Ha

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Kim Barney 16 December 2019

Ha ha ha! Thanks for the comment, Spock!

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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