For an attempt to begin such verse
I must abstain from any meter.
There has also been a murder of rhythm,
Amongst the other sentiments.
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I murder my sentiments And they, murder me....so true, yeah sentiments & life inter depends to each other some extent, after the murder of sentiment, man seems alive but he is not alive inwardly...great poem, thanks for sharing
this one is very good one....tip one...never used common sentences and syntax should be like prose..this demands the post modern poetry.. rest is fine and good....
revenge is uninvited, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
one word perfect........i see a bright future with a brilliant writer......... a well done job