Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Murder Of Sentiments Comments

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For an attempt to begin such verse
I must abstain from any meter.
There has also been a murder of rhythm,
Amongst the other sentiments.
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Vartika Pandey
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Payal Parande 18 June 2013

one word perfect........i see a bright future with a brilliant writer......... a well done job

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Farah Ilyas 18 June 2013

I murder my sentiments And they, murder me....so true, yeah sentiments & life inter depends to each other some extent, after the murder of sentiment, man seems alive but he is not alive inwardly...great poem, thanks for sharing

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Wahab Abdul 18 June 2013

this one is very good one....tip one...never used common sentences and syntax should be like prose..this demands the post modern poetry.. rest is fine and good....

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Gajanan Mishra 18 June 2013

revenge is uninvited, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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