Thursday, February 5, 2015

Murder Of Crows Comments

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There's a murder crows following me.
What did they see, why did they pick me,
Do they see anguish, turmoil and torment,
Or do they see innocence, joy and content,
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Bri Edwards 16 March 2015

i like the change of pick to peck. did you intentionally leave out of twice? like the rhyming. my favorite line: Or are they just messing about, with my head, : ................. i think this is the correct answer! at least they aren't teradactyls! oops! pterodactyls. bri :)

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Noreen Carden 03 March 2015

I only found out recently that a murder of crows is a group of crows I like this poem very much

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