Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Murder Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

Kill me,
Jump Me,
End my life like I care,
Take this gun and shoot me,
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Jennifer Cook
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Camille Ortiz 12 May 2019

This is how I feel when my family just doesnโ€™t care manly everyday

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Klayden 04 May 2018

Paaaaaaaa this is sick

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Akhtar Jawad 30 April 2018

Sometimes we want in love that someone we love may love in such a way that we forget as to who we are. The poetess has nicely painted such a feeling in love.

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Smol boy 27 February 2018

This describes how i feel๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป

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Big boy 27 February 2018

very nice๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 November 2017

Ah! Just end my life tonight, says it all. Love poem.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2017

Inner suffering is well manifested But mam please see with my poem Opening eyes. Everything is bright and beautiful. Nicely crafted poem. Thanks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 October 2017

Fascinating narration! Murder me, Murder me here, Just end it now, End my suffering, Make it go away - I loved the style of writing! Great! !

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James Mclain 18 April 2017

LOL.. premature death instead of life, You now live is not the if one is dead instead alive. The bounty in the sea, blue waves, that Stay the color that one lives to only give.. oil.. James

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James Mclain 18 November 2016

what have you done? a black cloud of pain as emotions disappear. once we were together in innocence, wide-eyed and untainted, but your thirst drifted away. a painful fever of agony - tears follow darkness, follow rain, love ground to dust. in a storm of righteousness, i see you in your dream's while I'm awake and you can't screen.. iip

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Brian Ely 06 November 2016

do you need someone to talk to?

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Rajnish Manga 15 March 2015

A desperate but truthful voice of one who cannot silence the skeptics and therefore, craving for death. This is an emotional entreat. Great poem.

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Abekah Emmanuel 26 October 2014

I do like this poem too because of its unique style. However, I am not getting clearly the message you wish to communicate. Indeed, we all go through such times as you are going through this poem, but there is no action without a reason. To tell someone to end your life is very critical and one cannot take such a bold decision without any reason in mind. Therefore, I would prefer you, at least, gave us a clue of why you are taking this rather odd decision. Good poem though!

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Sarah Mohyla 28 December 2012

Its so simple but the story behind it seems so complicated. I luv it! !

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Sarah Mohyla 12 December 2012

I love it! It's so relatable for me

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Sharmaine Walker 13 May 2012

gurl anit no man worth losing your life, but good poem

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Hadyn Rodriguez 07 March 2009

i really do like your poem,

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Ian Singer 09 December 2008

best freaking poem i have read all day

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Kory Cook 03 April 2008

That was awesome. good job

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Yeri Lee 31 January 2007

hey gurl, i noe how u feel b/c i was just like dat wen i got mad 2 another preson 4 no f* reason!

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