Murder Me Comments

This is how I feel when my family just doesn’t care manly everyday

Paaaaaaaa this is sick

Sometimes we want in love that someone we love may love in such a way that we forget as to who we are. The poetess has nicely painted such a feeling in love.

This describes how i feel👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

very nice👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

Ah! Just end my life tonight, says it all. Love poem.

Inner suffering is well manifested But mam please see with my poem Opening eyes. Everything is bright and beautiful. Nicely crafted poem. Thanks.

Fascinating narration! Murder me, Murder me here, Just end it now, End my suffering, Make it go away - I loved the style of writing! Great! !

LOL.. premature death instead of life, You now live is not the if one is dead instead alive. The bounty in the sea, blue waves, that Stay the color that one lives to only give.. oil.. James

what have you done? a black cloud of pain as emotions disappear. once we were together in innocence, wide-eyed and untainted, but your thirst drifted away. a painful fever of agony - tears follow darkness, follow rain, love ground to dust. in a storm of righteousness, i see you in your dream's while I'm awake and you can't screen.. iip

do you need someone to talk to?

A desperate but truthful voice of one who cannot silence the skeptics and therefore, craving for death. This is an emotional entreat. Great poem.

I do like this poem too because of its unique style. However, I am not getting clearly the message you wish to communicate. Indeed, we all go through such times as you are going through this poem, but there is no action without a reason. To tell someone to end your life is very critical and one cannot take such a bold decision without any reason in mind. Therefore, I would prefer you, at least, gave us a clue of why you are taking this rather odd decision. Good poem though!

Its so simple but the story behind it seems so complicated. I luv it! !

I love it! It's so relatable for me

gurl anit no man worth losing your life, but good poem

i really do like your poem,

best freaking poem i have read all day

That was awesome. good job

hey gurl, i noe how u feel b/c i was just like dat wen i got mad 2 another preson 4 no f* reason!