Murder By Suicide Comments

Oh, this is so violent, painful and beautifully written, you were able to put all those feelings into this poem! Great! Elya Thorn

All pain and no hope or forgiveness. That's a recipe for suicide alright, I'd say. Strong (almost too strong) poem.

Yes! that is exactly what happens, whether you do it within sight or not. Suicide's rickochete goes a long long way. That is why, it is braver to stay. Good flowing piece. But I'm not rating it. Tai

Is that you? I have to write 20, but just: is that you?