Murder At Six Comments

This is very powerful...sincerely bridgid...x

Very rich in metaphors. A good penning, maganda! I could not thoroughly conclude that the story dealt with a murder scene, you could be touching on another introspection much deeper and let our imagination works on different perspective, perhaps characterizing a dark life, a fate gone ill, sudden frustration or illness could also be the theme of this write, no doubt about the tone...t'was sad and greatly expressed. Galing talaga ng pinoy! ... =cynthia PS: thanks for the comment u provided my poem THE FINAL PLEA, you're right in every word told. Good morning Philippines.

Very powerful imagery. The atmosphere is almost primeval. Congratulations! gershon

Rich writing, Shogunoka, and that's one clever title. Regards, Gina.