...Murder... Comments

You capture in an accurate and expressive technic the insight of our human nature -

clean and significant...........10+

'Cause with Anger and Sadness Happiness…Is murdered… And the Mind…dancing in madness.' Nicely presented,10++

sensitive write, Sarah...you use a strong and attractive vocab nicely to express your thoughts...good piece...thanks...10

touching poem, well done thanks for sharing sarah

A murder within heart and mind.....No dagger, no blood. Anger kills many other feelings but sadness is always creative. Good write, Sarah. Best Wishes Naseer

good write sarah