Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Murder Comments

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Life is never what you want it to be,
Trapped in a swirling sense of reality.
Never coming to a halt,
Is it never anyone's fault?
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Daniela X. Daraz
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I really like this poem. I feel like it has a really good message. It makes me think of all the aborted babies, and idk how you feel about it, but I'm against abortion, cuz every life matters. I really like the rhyming too, it really flows nicely.

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