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It is something special and very pleasent nice nice poem friend 10

Wow I enjoyed reading this poem very much...The format that you chose to compose it in is very special. It forces you to think beyond the bare surface...

wow! i like these poem :) ang galing mo....

Phraseology excellent - - - - these roundabout sentences will be remembered just because they are unusual - - and the sentiment of the piece crys out - - good read...... and 10 from Fay...xx

Incredible. The real meaning of this poem hides behind a simple complexity.10/10

a series of paradoxical statements to stress the need to transparent. good write