Tuesday, January 28, 2020

Mumbai Bay.... Comments

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Mumbai Bay

The full moon shape hues of dusk
falls further away
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Anil Kumar Panda 02 February 2020

Mumbai is a dream land for those who go their to meet their aspirations and ambition. One of my fav cities. Thanks for visiting and positive response. Thanks for sharing your feelings.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 February 2020

Re-visiting this poem I have got immense pleasure and I have completely got once again a picture of Mumbai Bay.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

With much eagerness I have truly visited Mumabi City by reading your poem and I have felt bay's breeze of motivation and marked each wave of joy. Thousands of time if I will admire, this will be very less for this poem. This is such a precious poem, I have no word to speak more. Many, many thanks to you. May God bring unlimited happiness for you and may your poetic pen run to write such beautiful poems forever!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

I am a common man and a common poet for people but still I draw attention of editors of PH towards this poem and to judge upon the value of penning to chose this as Member Poem of the Day as soon as possible. By doing so, I hope that editors of PH will honour Mumbai City, the most important city of India and the world and people of India. This memory poem will definitely win hearts of many.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

If I were an editor, I would chose this poem as the poem of the day right now and today only and I would place this among top 500 poems in showcase on the 1st day of February 2020. I expect that, one day this poem will be chosen as the poem of the day. You have given your maximum effort to make this poem very heart touting and beautiful like Sea of Arabia and Indian Ocean sings its glory.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

At night Mumabi wears the garland of light and at day wears necklace of sunbeam. Dusk everyday comes with golden angels to worship Goddess Mumbai, Mumba Mother on the beautiful bay. Walking in Marine Drive, a 3.6-kilometre-long Promenade along the Netaji Subhash Chandra Bose Road in South Mumbai in the city, people and visitors join in the whole day and night festival of Mumabi City. Dream and reality bloom more.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

Mumbai Port has one of the best natural harbours and after reading your poem I remember back Mumbai Port Trust and Jawaharlal Nehru Port Trust lie on Mumbai Bay. The Chhatrapati Shivaji Maharaj International Airport welcomes the visitors to Mumbai Metro City and in one of the beautiful busy airport of India. Every citizen dreams to visit Mumbai in his lifetime. If he visits, he feels himself fortunate.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

Mumbai is master city for your Master Poet and May God's grace fall in abundance on people of Mumbai and visitors of Mumbai Bay! Mumbai is master of Bollywood and heaven of art, culture and business. Artistic people get true recognition when they reach Mumbai. Mumbai Media is very fast. Mumbai Wind gives us tender touch. Your goodbye has sprinkled immeasurable love for our Indian city.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

I am not worried at all if anyone becomes jealous. I have my freedom of reading and commenting and I truly love this poem. I declare this poem as the poem of heart and I highly recommend others to read this valuable poem. Time is precious. We should give time to such work. As per my opinion your valuable time is properly used and your high perception of Mumabi is highly appreciated. I feel that reading your poem my time is properly utilized.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

With this beloved January's 28th day of 2020 I declare this poem as the most precious top special poem of the day of Mahakul's heart and all of my family members and fellow poets will love and treasure this Mumabi poem forever. Today this is my poem of the day and let me read this again and again and give my deepest view. Let me give my time to read and review such valuable poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

As a responsible citizen of India I specially thank you very much for creating such a valuable poem. I adore your high quality of observation and responsibility. You are a very kind and reputed world traveler and you have gained much knowledge travelling across the world. You have felt Mumbai city in your deepest core. People love St. Mary's church and pray here.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

Mumbai never sleeps and ever dreams. Beauty of Mumbai is benevolent and this city has become lifeline for many. Your respectable goodbye will definitely be printed in the heart of Mumbai and people of India. You have truly expressed your nice view about bay of Mumbai. As a responsible citizen of

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

Mahim Bay is a bay, part of the Arabian Sea in Mumbai is very attractive and beautiful to poetic vision. Mahim Bay sings for Mumbai and motivates its visitors to visit many other beaches. The shore of Back Bay includes Chowpatty Beach of Mumbai which is very famed and liked by many people. Nariman Point and Marine Drive road increase the beauty of this Mumbai city are associated with Back Bay.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

By writing the memorable poem you have respected this City and Indian Subcontinent. You measured the different tongues, conversations and stories and beautifully presented everything. This carries perception and emotion of your journey and evening light has sparked to dwell with gracious beauty. Mumbai is moonbeam for us sunbeam of sovereignty for many other cities.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 January 2020

Mumbai is the city of dreams of many and one of the most four busy cities of the world. Beach of Mumbai attracts many and motivates them to sustain in their real dream. Starting from dawn we notice beauty. The full moon shape hues of dusk amazes mind. Bay of Mumbai bows before God to grasp Divine beauty when Dusk comes. You have penned an excellent poem from your memory. Thank you very much for sharing this.10

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Kingsley Egbukole 28 January 2020

Interesting poem, nicely written. Beautiful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 January 2020

Thank you so much for your responses, your fantastic comment and valuable feedback, Kingsley.

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