Monday, March 30, 2009

Mum Please Come Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mum I miss you come back home
I want you here
I'm all alone
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Steven Iceberg
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Mikayla Carpenter 18 June 2009

This is a verry emotional peice that will touch alot of people, it did me. Beautifully written: ]

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Nangula Immanuel 20 May 2009

aww! that's sad. mums are one of life's most precious gifts!

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Ruth Walters 03 May 2009

Mums are so precious and you've captured that here. Very poignant. Ruthy: -)))

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Xxx Xxx 24 April 2009

i feel that you have an honest voice...

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Amrit Razz 23 April 2009

hey this poem is really good! ur poem brought tear in my eyes! ! keep it up fren! !

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