Thursday, October 3, 2013

Multitasking Comments

Rating: 5.0

On my shoulder a heap of garment
In two hands two birded cage
In my mind time management
That I love to do with craze!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 05 October 2013

A beautiful and humorous conclusion to an interesting poem! ! With one hand I push toothbrush With one eye I keep check on milk...... I often do that! Enjoyed much! ! ....

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Tribhawan Kaul 04 October 2013

In this thankless pursuit I can’t tell thee If I manage time or time manages me But one thing sure I make time on the bed For not just love but what cooks in head! ......these lines are like icing on the cake. Great.

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Lorraine Colon 03 October 2013

You certainly are a busy man. Lucky for us, you still find time to write your wonderful poems!

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