Monday, March 7, 2005

Multifaceted Comments

Rating: 4.1

Amidst a raucous background, I blend myself
with the noise
as a chameleon does.
I crawl through pulsing colors on painted walls,
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Zoe Nyght
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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 07 March 2005

it seems poemhunter is constantly wreaking havoc on your poems...i understand, fictionpress did the same to mine. but about the poem: I liked the voice, you can feel her distress in the second line

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Zoe Nyght

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Artesia, California
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