Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, May 1, 2014

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“Who is prepared to walk with me” no one
This question strikes me from time to time
My eyes search for and puts same thing
I have no answer for anything
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

A beautiful poem written with much hope. Nice!

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Like 3 hours ago by #dale to Multi fold

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Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta hasmukkh 5 secs · Unlike · 1

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a positive outlook annette philipose3 minutes ago Inspirational Comment +1

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Inconsistent poetic timining Tim ZimmermanLess than a minute ago This poem is not the best I like core Ideas but should make more of an effort into the syllable count and rhyming of the syllable at the end of the sentences. Open horizon do not carry a rhyming syllable, join pain same thing distance once, same... needs work... Comment +1

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Very Well done Liam Cullen6 minutes ago Awesome

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“Who is prepared to walk with me” no one This question strikes me from time to time

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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