Tuesday, August 4, 2020

Multi Colored Maple Leaves Comments

Rating: 5.0

The gentle wind tossed
Multi colored maple leaves
Into the soft grass
Spread like quilted comforter
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Sandra Feldman 03 October 2020

You have painted with words a most beautiful scene! Brilliant and unforgettable! Pure delight!

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2020

Romance of nature! ! ! Aroma of creation! ! ! ! ! With the fragrance of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

Multi colored maple leaves Spread like quilted comforter On a soft relaxing bed........ I feel here beautiful imagery; nicely crafted the nature

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Valsa George 06 August 2020

Maple is indeed a lovely sight in Autumn with an array of multicoloured leaves. As Autumn advances, the leaves begin to fall in yellow, amber and red tints, forming a carpet or a cosy quilt on the surface of the earth! Lovely comparison! A whole lot of scenes come to my mind.... all that I saw in the US on my visit to the country on a Fall. A sure 10

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M Asim Nehal 05 August 2020

Wow wow so well thought. I am speechless.10++

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Anjandev Roy 05 August 2020

......quilted comforter.....significant.....anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 05 August 2020

Your poems are more alive than nature itself!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 August 2020

A well composed poem. Simply exceptional...10+++❤️❤️❤️

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2020

3) .thinking that these maple leaves stands for unity, tolerance, and peace.on that canadian flag, I lay in bed upon these multi coloured maple leaves as you described loveliest here. True fascinating! A full 10 and much much more (many times I forget to give these scores, but as long as the full appreciations are there, then points or no points are no more important. God Bless You, dear Mrs. Juan Austin!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2020

2) I cite your beautiful poem here, when thinking longer this is also on the Canadian flag (the maple leaves) but let me stick to your cutest crystal clearly composed creation (what an alliteration!) , yes, let me stick to the poem of the great poetess! Here it goes: The gentle wind tossed Multi colored maple leaves Into the soft grass Spread like quilted comforter On a soft relaxing bed..............

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2020

After hard working, after long thinking and then you read this gorgeous poem....WOW! Such a deep relaxing feel you will nothing more than to sit there gazing at the wonderful show appearing before you. WOW! This IS experience of the day then comes the closing day I thank God for this great Blessings that I have read through your poem full of brilliance, dear great poetess! Once again reading this, my mind is still here with the leaves the multi coloured Maple leaves....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 August 2020

2) Having seen this scene, I was rapidly attracted by this view of a quilted relaxing bed. Such softness. So romantic! This dreamy poem goes straight to MyPoemsList. A 10+++ God's Blessings for you and your beloved family, dear poetess. A comforting poem like this makes me directly feel fresh and comfortable.like my own home. Thank you for this loveliest creation, dearest friend.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 August 2020

How relaxing and How wonderful this sleep would be! Sleeping on a Spread bed as a quilted comforter On a soft relaxing bed Fall asleep relaxed on such a soft bed, what a luxury! Nice relaxed poem for after a hard day of work.

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Soran M. H 04 August 2020

you are a poet who can read the language of nature, because you are so close to it, always you are capturing the special moment in the nature around you then painting your colourful poem with it, like a skillful painter.. 10+and onto Fav List

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Soran M. H 04 August 2020

Spread like quilted comforter On a soft relaxing bed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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