Saturday, July 16, 2016

Mukulibara Apekhyare- A Poem In Odia Language Comments

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Chakhyu mora klanta
Samaya chhadei neichhi teja
Deha manaru
Santira bichhanati sajauchhi Kala
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Bharati Nayak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2022

Deha manaru Santira bichhanati sajauchhi Kala Swopna mane kintu sajala chirakala Nisprabha chakhyure duniara chhabi.....wonderful expression! !

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Rajendra Rout 31 October 2017

Akhire pade Kete swopnanka Kyata bikhyata deha Swopna paain Bohi jaai thiba kete luha Kholi debiki duara Jete sabu aabaddha aabega mananku Dekhibi Kuni jhia pari semane kemiti Kheluchhanti Khola aganare Swadhinatara sangeeta re Mukharita heuchi Mora samja sakala.madam i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing...10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2017

'Mukulibara Apekhyare' heuchhi apananka kalamara eka abhinaba srusti jaha manara udbega jharanaru jhari ase kulu kulu dhwani. Chamatkara hoichhi barnana, kichhi dhadi karuchhi uddhara.. ... Akhire pade Kete swopnanka Kyata bikhyata deha Swopna paain Bohi jaai thiba kete luha Kholi debiki duara Jete sabu aabaddha aabega mananku Dekhibi Kuni jhia pari semane kemiti Kheluchhanti Khola aganare Swadhinatara sangeeta re Mukharita heuchi Mora samja sakala Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 17 January 2017

How I wish I could write poems in my mother tongue 👅.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 18 July 2016

Dreams are missed on the half of the way but dreams will dazzle soon in reality of expression. Amazing sharing definitely. Nicely penned poem shared.10

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Bharati Nayak 18 January 2017

Thank you very much for your marvelous comments on my poems.

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