Muerto Al Nacer Comments

So sad! But so well written. I rips your heart out to see a life so sadly smitten. The impact of the title in Spanish, 'Muerto al Nacer' is overpowering and unforgettable.A gigantic example and deeply rendered poem to be remember for its message and sentimental greatness..5+++

The maladies of drugs menace. This wail of an unborn should open many eyes, many ears and many hearts. My eyes well up, Belle. So I stop.

Viva por Gracia. Beautiful, soul-source poetry. Bodies are so easily damaged, and yet still, somehow by grace, they contain an endless, beautiful soul; the body passes, the spirit soars. This poem has spirit, it soars.

Raw power....brilliant verse, Linda.

This poem is kind like a punch in the stomach. Excellent.

It's a magnificent poem.... beautiful expression. Loved reading this wonderful composition of yours...5 stars

A heartfelt poem! It powerfully expresses what are the hazards of drug abuse and promiscuity.The consequences may lead to still birth, retarded child or a child with many health problems.

A very sad story, may be got carried away by the surrounding storm. Heartfelt poem 5(*****

very powerful poem indeed

A very sobering look at a common modern problem. Five stars!