Road passing beside broken building,
It has seen green creepers and grass,
Hollow road has kept rainy water inside,
Mud has made suspension with rain water.
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A rainy day is a day of joy to feel The pool of muddy water - why it is there? Nicely dealt in the poem.
Here unfortunately the roads are like rivers! Schools and Colleges are given holidays! Rain wreaks havoc! Reading your poem, I feel your land is blessed with enough rain! A beautiful poem!
Only a lovely mind like Kumarmani's could make a pretty poem out of muddy rain water! I love your personification of the sun, with its drinking. Truly a beautiful poem.
It is wonderful how a poet's perception sees beauty in its surroundings - -An amazing poem - -
A fascinating poem. A keen observation on nature's wonders and beauty. Beautifully crafted write.10++++
Seeing what is not seen by everybody is what the poet does. You have done it Kumar. You make us to like muddy water. Thank you.
A poet must be able to depict a scene in words. You have done this admirably in this poem.+++10
Joy of mud and rain tops and bottoms this haiku. Joy of mud and rain
Mud has become rainy.. wonderful. A magnificent poem dear poet.5 stars.