Thursday, September 24, 2015

Muddy Girl And A Barbie Doll Comments

Rating: 5.0

She made a doll out of vegetables and fruits
Her father was a vegetable vendor
She was enjoying the moment
Playing with it without worries
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 21 November 2015

Touching story in your nice poem. Good job. Asim

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Sanjukta Nag 24 September 2015

Oh speechless.... economical difference makes a huge difference on thoughts as well as on life style.. and it is wonderfully expressed by the two little girls' state of mind, representing different values of different background.

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Rajnish Manga 24 September 2015

A beautiful poem interspersed with a wonderful imagery and a story makes it a sheer pleasure to read. Hats off to the skillful treatment of human emotions. Thanks.

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M. Asim Nehal

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