Thursday, November 23, 2023

Muddles Of Mind Comments

Rating: 3.0

Why it's endless
Lots of questions but
Still searching for the answer
Why did he make it so hopeless.
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Fatema Khatun
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2023

MESSAGE: I have sent you a message about the many mistakes in the poem. Please correct.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2023

Last line of the poem: I know you have all the solutions. About Muddles of the mind.5*****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2023

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.5 Stars. TFS

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3) usually I ignore such errors in a poem. Or, sometimes I point it out to the poet by a private mail, so that he/she may correct.. But here, the errors are too many

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2) take this line: "No one is here trustable here".. Repeated word ‘here' indicates scant care in writing and polishing the poem. I can list more….

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I do not understand how this poem qualifies for Poem Of The Day! PoemHunter has made itself so silly and worthless. Every line of the poem has at least one error, grammatical or not…

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