Mud On My Shoe (A Poem About Regret) Comments

Impressive display of free-verse...Crisp, tight structural movement glides mellifluously..Rue is an element of life that unless we know for a fact that we have not done the right thing, is an element that we tend to unfairly level on ourselves due to that Would've...Should've...Could'veconcept that we all fall victim to...A fine penning, young lady ~FjR~

Even if you can't make things right. Getting out the feeling will help. Good poem, I felt the pain and longing and regret.