Tuesday, February 26, 2019

Mt. Everest, Beautiful And Deadly Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are so attractive, like a light to a moth
For tne adventurous, daring and for the bold
You're like a woman's breast so steep and erect
Every climber's dream is your nipple touch and reach
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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2019

Very remarkable Ode Poem to this Highest Top of the world. As the poet sees from this side of the mountains'view. Excellent poem, powerful words, true manly, since the mountain is compared with a woman's breast. Well, I must admit that the metaphors used are of good quality. What is more best than a woman's breast, at least for a male poet. Thank you for sharing this lovely Ode. I have enjoyed very much. God's Blessings. A 10+++++++++

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