~ Ms. Niv Waiting ~ Comments

Hopefully embraces by a mellifluent universe waiting still as well :)

This piece cojures pictures of a beach boy.

The images and diction are quite alluring and can be- in my opinion-analyzed on a couple levels: the power of the beauty of the female and the beauty of nature 'waiting' for sun set to sun and rise and all life form in their majestic beauty! Ms Niv, captured both level of her poem with, striking images, and description that blows one mind. Thanks for such a beautiful poem! A! 0+++-i hope the my register.

Carmine folded in shades of baby pinks... and subtleties... shroud the turmoil...deep within... for nature will always have its way...we will pick up the debris too well written...balanced and structured cheers and ten

hi Niv, A poem of good metaphor, the mood of yours has been straight way projected in the nature and its art. 'Liquid Diamond Love' - a good phrase well set here. So many other beautiful lines are there to give your poem a great height. Keep it up. Ten + Keep it up. Gautam

YOU PLAY THE LEAD ROLE IN THIS UNIQUE POEM OF YOURS...BUT WHY REMAIN STILL AT THE END

Wonderful. The use of poet names made it really beautiful. Very well crafted.

Hi Niv - this is Beautiful - Well structured - lovely form and flow - excellent content - a TEN on all counts. V 1 Sets the scene the lovely Ms Niv is waiting - time is passing. V 2 What does she have to offer her Beau? Liquid Diamond Love - melting as the Sun is setting 'Kissing the hazy-fuzzy horizon' in a way that Ms Viv longs to be kissed. V 3 The tension hightens - Will her Beau appear? Ms Niv is more ready for him than she has ever been! 'Picasso's angled effervescence dame in outre outfit' Were is O'Beau are all Irishmen this reticent? Ms Niv is waiting still - AMAZING! None of us red blooded PH Males would keep you waiting Ms Niv - we all love you. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

‘…At distant stoic sky // Kissing hazy-fuzzy horizon….’ Resplendent subjectivisation…subsubtle yet pulsatile… Ten++ AB London

Like all Dame [Ms. Nivedita LOL! ], your waiting worth in such ambience and outfit… Excellently described …romantic…luring… Dr. V.

lovely romantic piece well done there for real well penned poem luwi

Excellent love poem of Dame [Ms. Nivedita]… it is waiting where bunking out of love…diamond… time being assassinated by watch...wow! ! Ten

Ambience and imagery are very romantic. Beau how he can stay without saying ‘yes’ to the call [Waiting] Ten++

Liquid diamond love // Dropping out, // Bunking out, Excellent expression…we’re waiting for you next poem… Escaping out effortlessly from my heart with jested ten++

Wow! ! Oozing romance from effervescent waiting dame. Solid ten++ [not effervescent LOL! ] dr.sakti

wonderful metaphoric...Nice reading

waiting is the most dificult thing to do and you are doing this with a sweet poem as your footmark.....thats cool its really lovely

In your uncanny style …just Niveditaiztion! Excellent extended horizon-ing the poetic ambience.

‘Picasso’s angled Effervescence dame…’ Excellent coinage cubicism in very romantic way added ‘effervescence’ gave romance a glib.

.........and sure 10+++