Wednesday, June 3, 2009

*****ms Lonely........... Comments

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as i sat and sipped my cup of coffee
i saw an lady sitting and doing the same

grazing out of the window and thinking
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vamsi krishna
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a cute image! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mona Martinez 08 June 2009

wow i enjoyed that. very visual.

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2009

her sorrowing beauty could be the reason for your attraction...impressive write

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C. P. Sharma 04 June 2009

Good poem but needs a little bit of editing. CP

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Priyanka Bhowmick 04 June 2009

wonderful one...yes it does happen sometime when u see some unknown one. u do not know abt him/ her... completly a stranger to u.. but still his/ her thoughts keep on disturbing u.. very gud write. above 10.

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 04 June 2009

hey...! ! ..this is gud.....but i think u shud double check ur spellings.....just a simple thing.... :)

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Justin Unanue 03 June 2009

A melancholy poem. Try to work on your spelling/grammar, I know it's hard!

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Surya . 03 June 2009

a very detailed picture on a lonely and beautifull lady.how nice. posted 10 love surya

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