*****ms Lonely........... Comments

a cute image! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

wow i enjoyed that. very visual.

her sorrowing beauty could be the reason for your attraction...impressive write

Good poem but needs a little bit of editing. CP

wonderful one...yes it does happen sometime when u see some unknown one. u do not know abt him/ her... completly a stranger to u.. but still his/ her thoughts keep on disturbing u.. very gud write. above 10.

hey...! ! ..this is gud.....but i think u shud double check ur spellings.....just a simple thing.... :)

A melancholy poem. Try to work on your spelling/grammar, I know it's hard!

a very detailed picture on a lonely and beautifull lady.how nice. posted 10 love surya