Thursday, October 8, 2015

Ms. Elevator And Mr. Ladder Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mr. Ladder you are outdated now,
Why don’t you retire peacefully?
This will help to save your face and grace
with which you worked all these days.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 10 September 2020

Great creative piece of poem second in a row today

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Robert Mugobi 10 October 2015

Nice piece Mohammed, I admire your creativity

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2015

Thank much for honouring my request.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 October 2015

WOW! ! ! ! I really enjoyed reading the dialog between Mr. Ladder and Mr. Elevator.....a great creative write! ! ! ! !

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2015

Thank u madam, I am happy u liked it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 October 2015

People are after money! And, many things are easily forgotten. Nice piece.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2015

Thanks much Mr. Edward.

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Loke Kok Yee 08 October 2015

What a humorous write your last line made me fall off my chair! Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2015

Thanks much......LKY

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Kelly Kurt 08 October 2015

I thoroughly enjoyed this intelligent, witty and well written poem, Mohammed. Very entertaining and wise. Thank you! !

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2015

Thanks Sir, I am happy since u liiked it.

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