Friday, September 18, 2015

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Mrs. Tanky Man
I called her,
Though she was never a Taitai (a Mrs.)
Darton refusing to marry anyone,
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Eugene Levich
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Bri Edwards 14 October 2015

ok, i'll send this story (that's what we used to call something like this before Gino started calling thempoems) to my exalted MyPoemList. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 14 October 2015

“Children are a mere conceit! ” ……………interesting! I AM/was A “CONCEIT” THEN? I always wondered what I was. I have heard (years ago) that BEFORE I was born (I don’t know HOW LONG) I had been a “twinkle in the eye” of someone. my father? the milkman? the postman? there were possibly many twinkles. if she had given Darton more Head, chop chop, OR perhaps if she had REFUSED to “give him Head”, Darton would have given HER Face! isn’t Pidgin English some kind of English? did he teach the others the same? ? did she/they speak to the pigeons? an interesting …………(that’s a pretty ‘safe’ word) …………..’poem’. I keep telling people that I AM “right in the head”, but no one believes me. the closest anyone ever came was the guy who said to me (after I was pulled from the ‘ring’) : “he really gave you a good shot right in the head! ”. bri ;)

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Kelly Kurt 18 September 2015

Interesting story. BTW, I am not right in the head either. : -)

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Eugene Levich 18 September 2015

Join the club! I appoint you honorary president, if you wish to accept.

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