Tuesday, July 12, 2005

Mrs. Smith Comments

Rating: 4.5

Yes, Mrs. Smith I surely would
hold hands with you if I just could
and with my innermost good feelings
I'd try to talk to you of healings
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 13 July 2005

Wow. I just have to wonder where in the world you get your inspirations! Such a great read. sincerely, Mary

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Raynette Eitel 12 July 2005

This poem is so understated and well-done. I am really undone after reading it and wondered how you managed to keep all the feelings tucked in as you wrote the last stanza. This is really fine work, Herbert. Raynette

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