Thursday, May 2, 2019

Mr Wonderful (New Version) Comments

Rating: 4.9

The empty void is banished, she's invited into a serene dreamland,
Where she unites with her Mr Wonderful,
They sway to the beautiful sound of her devoted dream-band,
She is resolute to be part of the sunlight,
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Hazel Durham
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Denis Mair 15 December 2019

TWO HEARTBEATS IN A COCCOON- - a memorable phrase. This woman has been preparing herself for a meaningful relationship. She is loyal to her future beau even before she meets him, if that is possible. And when she sees him, she knows... Love does find a way.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 October 2019

Life the journey of dream (mixed of illusion and reality) truth- a delusional power! in love the life is flying to goalless destination WONDERFULNESS standing by the side of all crossing welcome on crisscross breathing

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Bri Edwards 11 August 2019

" Ray" it must be a typo. Surely you meant " Bri" ! ! ! ? favorite lines: " To run away from her internal ache, She has untamed flame coloured hair wild and awake, " ....though i'd put a hyphen in " coloured-hair" . of course i'm American, so i CAN. bri :)

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Valsa George 06 May 2019

In her homeland she fights to survive the darkness of each lone night, A black drape casting its sombre mood as she longs for the light Lovely lines on some one who endures to come out of the night of darkness to daylight. A remarkable poem on how life changes when one finds a beautiful partner for one's life! Love has a magic and this magic is powerfully transferred through beautiful verse!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2019

A fascinating expression has been made astutely.. This is really a beautiful poem and It is a great tribute to your friend Yvonne and her husband Ray. The last six lines are much impressive. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.

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