Mr Wonderful Comments

This is the second time I am reading this very well composed poem. Really enjoyable!

Mr wonderful meets is wonderful. Dreams do come true. Great poem.

I feel this is the continuation of your poem City Lights! I am happy she has come to compromise with her life and his eyes have begun to dazzle her more than New york's city lights and that she has really discovered her Mr. Wonderful in a better light! Very imaginative Hazel!

God fulfills every one's desire. Nicely penned and I think you have taken much pain to explore your thoughts.

The tale is told in a charming way and the composition has come off as a semi anecdote of the kind. The fantasies of the human minds are marvellous and Mr Wonderful is a great offspring of such fantasies here. I am giving 10 marks for it Hazel.

this is a great story Hazel the stanza she falls deeply in is beautifully written enjoyed very much

She enhances her beauty that already existed to get the prince of her sweet dreams and she gets her love her eyes become brighter than New York lights. Love makes her a model of beauty. A poem of sweet and lovely dreams......10.

You are an amazing story teller Hazel. Oh I love those green eyes that shine like diamonds

Mr. wonderful is a life based wonderfully composed and presented poem really. Very nicely penned.

WoW! ...Hazel......that was terrific....the waiting..though long is not agonizing...but soothing to the core of sunlight....Bravo! ! Soumita