Wednesday, December 28, 2005

Mr. Winnie Strolled Into Meng's Comments

Rating: 5.0

sat at our table
then spread out his goods
but I was shocked to see him as
the temperature now hovered near zero.
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Gina Onyemaechi 29 December 2005

Re Adam Reynolds' comments: or a film script? I want to learn more about the lives of Treasure, Sophy, Bernstein, Jenks, German, Desire, Tallulah and whoever 'I' refers to in your work. And I'd like to see that Mengs place. So how about it?

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Amanda Lukas 28 December 2005

I agree with Adam. Each of your poems seem to be left with a to be continued...

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... ... 28 December 2005

i simply do not know how you are writing poems like these at the moment charles. i mentioned last week you should think about short stories, although i'll revise that suggestion now to a novel. all these poems merge and overlap and are as i mentioned a couple days ago, of the same essential story. your poems are chock-crammed with unforgettable and surreal characters.

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