Friday, August 28, 2020

Mr Suicide Finds Redemption Comments

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I need to buy a razor blade,
For what I have planned.
Then run a welcome bath,
And escape this dreary land.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 29 August 2020

Very harrowing poem Shaun with redemption at the end. The rate of suicide here in the U.K is alarming. I wonder how many people have taken their own lives during lockdown..a very, very sad state of affairs. It's definitely a troubled, but light at the end of a long dark tunnel inspired ten from me!

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Shaun Cronick 28 August 2020

I made a comment earlier in Dominic Windram's fine poem called Life's Alluring Melody. I mentioned the words about sounding like a manic depressive and the phrase stuck. So this is the result and it was going to end darkly, but then added the last stanza as a moral message of hope to anyone contemplating that sad act. Inspiration I guess is everywhere and thank you Dominic Windram and your more than fine poem Life's Alluring Melody.

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