Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Mr Soldier Comments

Rating: 4.9

Mr soldier is woken by the beagle
Left, right he is marched on by the whistle
The sound of the whistle
Is a clarion call to duty
...
Read full text

Babatunde Aremu
COMMENTS
Ebi Robert 15 November 2013

this poem is the best i think i have read through out this year...thanks

2 0 Reply
Ramesh Rai 12 October 2013

a beautiful write expressing the life n sacrifices of a soldier

2 0 Reply
John Brown 01 October 2013

It's sad, but man's greatest talent it seems is to become expert at blowing other men to bits. Good poem.

2 0 Reply
Ruth Walters 01 October 2013

I hate wars and politicians who send men to die when at the end, when all is done we all have to talk to each other and come to some sort of compromise about our issues, our differences. Yes I respect a soldier for defending his own but when we are really civilised, hopefully there will be no need :) It is much harder to create a life than to destroy it, much harder to build than to knock down.......but often the easier route is taken.

2 0 Reply
Ramesh Rai 23 September 2013

The life of a soldier is fully dedicated to his country and her people. a great write.

2 0 Reply
Unwritten Soul 16 September 2013

I respect this write as i respect to soldiers...a nice tribute..! ! _Soul

2 0 Reply
Rahul Pandey 07 February 2013

soldier... Respect shows your poetry They sacrifies to set us free

2 0 Reply
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 January 2013

the life of a soldier is very haunting! even after he retires, he has to live with his sad and cruel memories! a nice poem on soldiers!

2 0 Reply
Dave Walker 23 January 2013

A fantastic poem, heartfelt words.

2 0 Reply
Lyn Paul 22 January 2013

You told a great story of A soldiers life. Very sad

2 0 Reply
Valsa George 22 January 2013

So true! So realistically you have portrayed the life of a soldier! At all circumstances, he has to respond to the call of duty. If he wins, he is hailed a hero and if not, an effigy to be burnt down! A nice dedication!

2 0 Reply
Babatunde Aremu

Babatunde Aremu

Ita-Ogbolu
Close
Error Success