Thursday, July 16, 2020

Mr Sandman Is Calling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Got to keep my wits about me,
Stay in this land of the living.
For a new poem not to display,
Would be a defeat so unforgiving.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 18 July 2020

I think this poem is a triumph of the will against the alluring, hyponotic powers of Mr Sandman. I certainly have my own struggles with him. Anyway, brilliant deployment of personification Shaun.Listen to the opening lines of Roy Orbison's In Dreams...'the candy- coloured clown they call the sandman'..simply marvellous. It's certainly a tip toeing, stardust sprinkling 10 from me!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 16 July 2020

Right. Mr Sandman always wins!

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