Mr. & Mrs. Comments

Re-reading this only makes the poem stronger. There are some really deep lines in here, a most poignant write. I especially like the last stanza, as though it were written by one of the great classics, the bonnet line gives it a timeliness not known in our lifetime. Great poem from a great poet, you are hugely underrated Mr Jordan! HG: -) xx

You have incredible talent as a poet! ! This poem not only tells a short story, but also portrays a very deep thought process! Hugs, Dee

God this is deep! ! I like this a lot, is it perhaps about a very nearly divorce? Or is that too obvious? ? ! ! Or perhaps that wee bit of cynicism regarding whether any two people should live their lives out til their dying days.... Hmm... a most introspective piece methinks. Good write Stug. HG: -) xx