Tuesday, July 3, 2007

Mr. James Clancy Comments

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When the women come by with their blood smells
Alive in the chalky morning,
He is right at their smiles like a tiny, quick bird,
His black, dotted eyes saying 'mornings' and 'evenings'.
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Steve Chering 05 August 2009

The language here leaves the reader wondering, is there a hand-book to direct one into the realms of real time understaning? Wordsmithery is clever but..maybe some small footnote might help those who struggle along?

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