Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Mr. Hated Comments

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Walking ahead or the road sliding back
both the same for him that day
not to stop at the beer bar,
the beer would drink him like
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Adeline Foster 23 September 2016

You are right: the ultimate universal power exists in us we just need to examine our knowledge. That power is available to all who call upon His Name. Enjoyed the pictorial quality of this poem. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline

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Unwritten Soul 25 April 2012

It's beautiful and good mind of you to write this, there are some unintentionally typing mistakes...not a bother to me, just telling...Your poem is good, as nice as your mind..keep writing Prakhar, it's a good job write more and more you will be better and better...A talent is in your hand! _Unwritten Soul

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