Monday, February 6, 2006

Mr Complainer Comments

Rating: 2.5

Nothing was ever good enough, nothing was ever right.
If white, he wanted it black, if day he wanted it night.
He’d sit all day in that dratted chair and criticize the world.
There was trouble from the minute his poisonous tongue uncurled.
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Dan Brown
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Jon Edward 14 March 2006

such people are funny, my grandpa's like that, but still a good hearted kind caring guy too.

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 06 February 2006

interesting poem...this was quit enjoyable...i had a husband like that once and it instantly made me thing of him...nice job!

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Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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