...Mr. Cigarette Comments

You said it very well, Eyan. A 10 from me. Ron

this is really good for us young people because everybody i see thats around my age thats all they do and im like yall die early if yall don't stop..

Watch a cigarette See a cancer stick this is really good for kids... I always tell my parents when they smoke they are going to get cancer. cigarettes are so gross. I am glad you wrote this. good job. ~CM~

good write, keep writing..grace

oh...chilling...i smoke but hate that i smoke but this is chilling, good poem i like it

AGREE! ! ! ! ! I hope this poem will make some people not spoil their health. LIFE IS GIVEN ONCE

Truly expressed. But Satan is there. Love your honest and sincere message. 10+++

Known truth knowingly shirked...fate of the present trend...excellent writing....kindly read my 'Agony' 'Beedi rollers', The Smoky Solomon'....Thank you

Cigarette makes one life always young.....withering young!

All too real for me..lost a brother recently and a father four years ago to the cancer stick..All too real!

Very sound reasons for stopping the smoking habit - - 10 from Fay

Ah, one of the many things in this world that will kill you, but people do it anyways. I'm not sure if you meant 'addictive' where you spelt 'additive? ' Pretty straightforward, but undoubtedly true; the kiss of death from a cigarettes breath.

I am not a smoker but I can admire your Mr. Cigarette. Should be displaced everywhere. Smokeless 10 for this anti-smoking piece of write. Best Wishes Naseer

it is death as i puff myself into the smooth tobacco leaf eternal embrace..im not Yul Brenner but cigarette smoking will kills ya...iip

I guess it is ok, to long to fit on package though.

I am not a smoker and hate it too, should use this on the bill boards, smoking shelters for Smokers to see, Very Good.

VERY good poem! I have a similar poem, which I wrote a while back- entitled: SMOKERS- please read and comment if you have the time!

ya sure, it is touching poem, deep meaning to all smokers please stop smoking

I love it. It is simple and proves a point. You brilliantly pieced this one together. Nice write.

this is quite a sensible poem, dear Eyan! cigarettes won't just make you rest to death but make you suffer first. if a smoker cannot just throw away their addiction to cigarettes i hope they'll be responsible enough to keep it to themselves. the effect to second smokers is even worse. i hope cigarettes won't blow away the smoker's conscience. two thumbs up and 10++++++++smiles for you! a must read!