Saturday, December 3, 2016

Mr. Bully Comments

Rating: 4.2

Pity, that is what i don't want
A letter i got, in a cursive font
'sorry' that is what they all say
I have to hear this every day
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leen Akel MNSR
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Unnikrishnan E S 18 December 2016

Hi Ieen, Marital violence, I had believed, happens only is homes of India, the third world countries. But, your poem proves otherwise, doesn't it? Yes, it has to stop. Women have to say firmly, STOP! Your poem, quite moving. Heart-rending.. It is as if I was reading the last few lines of a big story. Great 100+ And I invite you to read my poem, Enter His Kingdom, on the same subject. may be you'd like it!

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Tom Billsborough 18 December 2016

A very moving poem about an awful problem for many. You write directly and very well.

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