Monday, December 7, 2009

Mowing Comments

Rating: 4.5

There was not a sound
but that of the machine
that howl against the sky
and magically sheared the grass
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Gert Strydom
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Ray Schreiber 07 December 2009

A nicely written and well turned poem. The last line was like a prize at the bottom of a cereal box. Very nice.

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Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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