Sunday, October 8, 2006

Moving South Comments

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Let's get married and move South,
where stereos still play the Beatles.
I'll take this old acoustic guitar
made in 1970, scruffy and out of tune.
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Melanie Emikohe
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Davency Leroy 11 October 2006

youre truly, amazingly talented

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Joseph Daly 08 October 2006

This narrative is excellent. It has that 20th Century classic feel to it. In one sense it sounds like a beat poem but structurally it is more than that. The language is great: laid back conversational, driving the flow forwards. I like this piece a lot.

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Melanie Emikohe

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