Saturday, May 12, 2018

Moving On To A Place I Don't Belong Comments

Rating: 5.0

I looked at the moon last night
but you were not there
I cast you away like I didn't care
I thought I could replace you
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Aqua Flower
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Carl Roussell 13 May 2018

Hindsight is 20/20 in love and life. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 13 May 2018

Chemistry is something you can't make happen! Hindsight definitely make things clearer! thanks for the comment!

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Rajendra Rout 12 May 2018

Lovely poem sharing dear poet. I enjoy your poem 10++++++++++++

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Aqua Flower 12 May 2018

Thank you for your comments and for the mulitiple pluses and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!

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Marissa Oakley Browne 12 May 2018

A melancholy love poem, thanks for sharing

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Aqua Flower 12 May 2018

Thank you for reading! Enjoyed your poem as well!

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Robert Murray Smith 12 May 2018

A poignant poem of great realisation.+++10 Robert

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Aqua Flower 12 May 2018

Looking at things introspectively has brought me to that realization..... thank you!

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