You expected of me so much,
More than I could deliver
And from me you got the most
But you gave me very little in return.
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you know how to make your voice the voice of every heart, in the reach of even a layman because a layman has a heart too...a situation experienced by almost all...is expressed with felicity of expression...
movin on and long gone, right htis is a very nice write. it really is it.
Great write! It's always a good thing when we learn from something so negative. Never to pass it on and to better ourselves with the lesson. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it!
Es Grande! I know just the person to fit the description! Nice work!
The pangs of unrequitted love is terrible. The poem breathes out strong feelings of resentment and at the same time suggests solutions to free oneself of any sense of remorse and be happy in oneself! Powerful write! !
It is said that loving yourself is the greatest love of all - I think it is more about having respect for oneself, without self-respect you can have little respect for others. An excellent write Romeo.
an outstanding expression of a true hear ted man. keep moving world is with you
Yes that's almost and unfortunately always what the love does, its like a game always there's a loser and winner but whatever it does, however it hurts, the life is going on and the love is like our breath if once we stop loving we stop living..... Very nice poem my friend thank you for sharing, have a very peaceful time always!
Forgetting that life As well as love Is a two-way street! Some key phrases what allows the avid reader feel the footsteps of the writer and learn life is sometimes the mantra to move on even if its alone.Not everything in life is to be accepted as a play as reality of tangible senses and a recondite world of spirituality with the inner mind construing something else does not go together.Its like a madrigal what Shakespeare has written over oldness and youth, over warmth and coldness, over the colour of water we see and the colour originally of tears are.Therefore the poet cannot afford but decided to move on.Electrifying write hereby.I enjoyed and hope others before me here failed expressions what to comment on one of the maestros of contemporary poetry when the poetic style is free and poetic form is Romance highlighting plaintains.Priceless n impeccable is what they thought about you Sir and i serve their mouthpiece..Trez bien!
Wow, thats exactly how I feel towards my ex wife, excellence indeed.
I understand the possible feeling, but I could see you bringing more life to it just as you encourage others with yoir comments