Saturday, September 29, 2012

Moving On Ahead Comments

Rating: 4.9

You expected of me so much,
More than I could deliver
And from me you got the most
But you gave me very little in return.
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Romeo Della Valle
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Alex Kenneh 03 May 2015

I understand the possible feeling, but I could see you bringing more life to it just as you encourage others with yoir comments

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Shahzia Batool 09 October 2012

you know how to make your voice the voice of every heart, in the reach of even a layman because a layman has a heart too...a situation experienced by almost all...is expressed with felicity of expression...

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Anhelica Velasquez 06 October 2012

movin on and long gone, right htis is a very nice write. it really is it.

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Chris Blazo 06 October 2012

Great write! It's always a good thing when we learn from something so negative. Never to pass it on and to better ourselves with the lesson. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it!

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Sharon Vincent 05 October 2012

Es Grande! I know just the person to fit the description! Nice work!

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Nitin Sahni 05 October 2012

Very nice. you are a poet of your class.Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 04 October 2012

The pangs of unrequitted love is terrible. The poem breathes out strong feelings of resentment and at the same time suggests solutions to free oneself of any sense of remorse and be happy in oneself! Powerful write! !

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Valerie Dohren 03 October 2012

It is said that loving yourself is the greatest love of all - I think it is more about having respect for oneself, without self-respect you can have little respect for others. An excellent write Romeo.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 02 October 2012

an outstanding expression of a true hear ted man. keep moving world is with you

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Heather Wilson 02 October 2012

A heartfelt write, I hope there are better times to come.

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Abiodun Osho 01 October 2012

some has to go for better ones to come. Nice poem

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Sossi Khachadourian 01 October 2012

Yes that's almost and unfortunately always what the love does, its like a game always there's a loser and winner but whatever it does, however it hurts, the life is going on and the love is like our breath if once we stop loving we stop living..... Very nice poem my friend thank you for sharing, have a very peaceful time always!

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 September 2012

Forgetting that life As well as love Is a two-way street! Some key phrases what allows the avid reader feel the footsteps of the writer and learn life is sometimes the mantra to move on even if its alone.Not everything in life is to be accepted as a play as reality of tangible senses and a recondite world of spirituality with the inner mind construing something else does not go together.Its like a madrigal what Shakespeare has written over oldness and youth, over warmth and coldness, over the colour of water we see and the colour originally of tears are.Therefore the poet cannot afford but decided to move on.Electrifying write hereby.I enjoyed and hope others before me here failed expressions what to comment on one of the maestros of contemporary poetry when the poetic style is free and poetic form is Romance highlighting plaintains.Priceless n impeccable is what they thought about you Sir and i serve their mouthpiece..Trez bien!

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Dcfizban@hotmail.com Cadywold 30 September 2012

Wow, thats exactly how I feel towards my ex wife, excellence indeed.

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