Thursday, April 6, 2017

Moving On Comments

Rating: 5.0

That's not my brand of perfume on your collar,
That's not my shade of lipstick on your cheek.
You say you never have an extra dollar,
You're tearing through your paycheck every week.
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Practicing Poetess
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Ray Hansell 20 September 2018

Nice and to the point.

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Practicing Poetess 20 September 2018

Thank you, Ray! Your poem was to the point, also- - and you got your point across in far fewer words than I used! :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2018

Betrayal! ! This meaningless wedding ring! Hurt! Break up. Be strong in your life and move on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks so much for reading, Edward Kofi. Actually, this is one of my older poems, and it is totally imaginary or fiction. The whole scenario is a product of my very fertile imagination, one of the best gifts a writer can possess!

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Rebecca Navarre 05 December 2017

A Very Heart Felt Powerful Write! ! ! ! ! Touchingly Done! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Practicing Poetess 09 December 2017

Rebecca, this one almost sounds like the lyrics to a country song! (they have a lot of songs about cheating and breaking up.) Thank you for appreciating a poem that was not one of my happy love poems!

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Barry Middleton 07 April 2017

When marriage comes to this point, sometimes divorce is the best answer. In my case it is the smartest thing I ever did. Very well written.

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Practicing Poetess 07 April 2017

Thank you, Barry. :) Better to be alone and have peace, than to be with the wrong person, who is wrecking your life and making you miserable with their bad choices and disloyalty. Unlike cats, we only get one life, so we owe it to ourselves to insure that it is a good one, at least as much as it is up to us.

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