Friday, February 24, 2012

Moving On Comments

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Those words, those smiles, I know won't return,
To move on is that I have to learn!
Looking at you my heart skips a beat,
I never expected you would ever cheat!
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Rishit Desai 01 March 2012

Very sad and touching. Hope it is just a poem and not your life. Great work.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 26 February 2012

Could imagine your eyes shining with tears, feel that defening silence between your sobs......great poem.... Again, in life these things happen..but its up to you, what decisions you make...think with your head not your heart, and always think about your future first....

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