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A beautiful piece, Ben.I will never forget this.

Wow! Ben, this is so action packed and the poem is also picturesque with its music, dance and color. Redheads perch, hunters pivot their spears and pop up characters do 'their thing' too It's all happening and you had to say goodbye....never mind you have had this published and what a memory this poem leaves and I would say far better than a postcard...10 love Karin