Monday, August 25, 2008

Moving Forward Comments

Rating: 5.0

don't look back, stay on this new track
allow the light to be, pardon the darkside you'll see
the window washer came by and cleaned
now when you peer about, all you'll see will newly sprout
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Alone Tone
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R T 14 October 2008

Simply lovely R T

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Seema Chowdhury 11 October 2008

very nice and soft wordings used in the poem....

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Linda Moore 04 October 2008

You are so right, we must keep our joy, so many things try to take it. We can refuse to let it go.......10 Lovely

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Bernard Ceasar 17 September 2008

...let the waves crash, then forgive them, for they won't last, they will however, shape the land quite clever, just don't mind them, don't be of them, all will be fine in time...wow-I really like this. ****-4 stars.

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