life is dark
life is bright
aggressions sparks
unsupecting delights
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Wow. I really like this..... I mean, it's all the doubt I've ever felt about life said so much more beautifully than I could! ! ! ! ! I love it!
Your poem shows the angst of the situation well. one thing though. eecummings may have broken the capitalization rules and a few punctuation rules, but he did so in a way that was clear to the reader. We're or missing word..... were. all in all nicely done otherwises.