Moves Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Moves

Rating: 5.0


As the snow begans to fall, dancing
across the forest and all. So lightly
and gracefully, the trees it shawls.
As the moon rises and natures lulled.
As the spirit moves and seasons call.
And the hearts enthralled.

Saturday, September 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,seasons,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 03 February 2022

A magnificent poem. Liked the ending, 'As the spirit moves and seasons call. And the hearts enthralled'....Top score

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Susan Williams 23 September 2018

So lightly / and gracefully, the trees it shawls. - - -] what a lovely image... the trees putting on a light white shawl around their shoulders! ! ! ! Lovely lovely writing here! ! ! 10 thousand snowflake4s! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 24 September 2018

Thank you! .. Susan, For your so beautifully kind reply! .. :) And bringing smiles! .. Your poetry ever so touches hearts and minds, capturing the moments, the beauty, the feelings in time, every page holds, such beautiful sentiments to find! .. Thank you! .. Ever so many blessings dear! ..

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Kostas Lagos 23 September 2018

Movement is life and life is movement. Brilliant poem!

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Rebecca Navarre 23 September 2018

Thank you! .. Kostas, For your very beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry is painted with such beauty and heart, you bring the reader into the feel of each word, each part! .. God bless! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2018

We admire the creation of God and his gifts to us. Nature is one of them in which beauty dances with trees, snow falls, and moon smiles and our hearts are enthralled. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Rebecca Navarre 23 September 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such a very beautiful and kind reply! .. Ever so deeply your poetry touches hearts and minds, inspiring, beautiful and kind! .. With a spirit that shines! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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