All together you walk in zigzag path,
We say this is morning walk in park,
You walk in straight towards light,
Now we say this is your journey.
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Moving towards straight path of wisdom is nice.Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet.
Our journey of life moves with ups and down and in zigzag path. But we are souls and our journey towards God is straight. This poem carries nice message.
Simply marvellous Kumar... a neat preaching poem...thanks for sharing
Zigzag movement is seen and motivated mind judges this path. This poem is interestingly narrated.